八歲的小貝拉喜歡寫故事,這是一本她正在努力寫的長篇小說,我選了一章節,翻成中文與大家分享。我盡所能原汁原味按照她的原文描述修改及翻譯,希望大家喜歡她的小說故事創作。我不得不說八歲能寫這樣,太強👍。
🥰這故事妳可於夜晚時,唸給孩子聽,我有附英文版。
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《小說故事創作 (Part1)by 八歲小貝拉》
1847年。
吃完晚飯,我繼續在餐桌寫著我的故事。
『已經很晚了。』媽媽提醒我。
我好討厭深夜,因為深夜裡有很多可怕的東西跑出來,例如:木乃伊,怪物,鬼魂,雪人…等。
我回到房間,看見姐姐艾瑪正在梳頭,她的頭髮是如此柔順美麗,不像我的頭髮又髒又亂,我坐下來想要改變自己的樣子,於是我看著鏡子一直說:『我很漂亮、我很美麗、我很漂亮、我很美麗…』這些話使我頭暈目眩。
隔日,星期天早晨,媽媽總是很忙,我在廚房興奮地跳來跳去,我想趕快見凱蒂,也想吃點餅乾,那種脆脆的餅乾。姐姐依然很漂亮,她穿著天藍色的洋裝上面綴著白色蝴蝶結在我面前飛舞。
『完了,凱蒂一定在等我!』我大喊。
媽媽立刻給我一塊麵包,她吩咐:『一路小心,妳必須在…』
『在十二點前回家,我知道了!』我離開了家,跑過樹林。
『衝啊!』我彷彿聽到了那些大樹不停地在我耳邊咆嘯,大聲且清晰。
今天天氣好冷,好像在最冷的冬日吃了49球冰淇淋一樣!
『嘿!』我向凱蒂揮手。
『你還好嗎?』凱蒂憂心問我:『我是說妳看起來好像吃了48球冰淇淋。』
『是49球冰淇淋。』我指正她。
凱蒂很困惑,用一種「我老是在不恰當的時候說了一句不該說的話」的那張臉看著我。
接著,我們走到了小溪邊。我們準備了兩個瓶子,要玩了一個名為“水花瓶子”的遊戲。我們在瓶子上打了個洞,把瓶子裝滿水,然後相互潑濺在對方的頭上,好似淋雨一般,也好像正在跟一位頑皮的男孩玩灑水遊戲!
『碰!』我和凱蒂忽然間聽見怪聲。我們嚇到,宛如兩個吃了100球冰淇淋的雪人,僵住了!
凱蒂原本是很勇敢的;但是現在看起來跟我一樣害怕。
『妳不是很勇敢嗎?為什麼妳現在看起來不像。』我壓低了聲音。
凱蒂看著我,嚴肅地說:『我們不應該在這時候開玩笑。』
凱蒂用腳尖輕輕走路,然後踏進溪流,水發出飛濺的聲音『啪噓、啪噓…』
『噓,妳正在把外星人嚇跑!』我小聲提醒凱蒂。
她點了點頭,用非常緩慢的速度前進,並專注凝視著那東西,然後一把握住它!
『噢,這是一隻可憐的小兔子。』凱蒂看著兔子,甚至…已經喜歡上牠。
『牠好像睡著了。』凱蒂像個嬰兒一樣,緊緊抱住兔子。凱蒂的擁抱有時不是一件好事,因為她總是顯得太興奮。
『我們可以來抓一些葉子使它變軟來餵牠。』我摸著兔子說。
『我們應該把牠交給黛拉。』凱蒂建議:『黛拉是一位非常優秀的動物護士,她只有九歲,但快十歲了。』
我們走著走著,終於到了黛拉的密室,那外頭有很多小動物正在等著她的幫助,所以她可能很忙。我們進了小屋棚,那是一間用樹葉和樹枝蓋成的小房子。我們東瞧西看,屋內有很多食物、藥品、水和其他東西。
黛拉正抱著一隻可愛嬌小的老鼠,名叫艾莉絲。
『這隻可憐的小兔子受傷了而且被遺棄,快救救她或他!』凱蒂抱著兔子快步走向黛拉,急促地請求幫助。
黛拉接過兔子仔細端詳說:『我會幫這隻兔子看看牠有什麼毛病,也會確認牠是她或他。』
凱蒂聽後,開心使盡地緊緊抱住黛拉。
『別開心太早!我們還不知道牠是否有什麼問題?』黛拉冷靜地說。
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(待續)
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《Story writing (Part 2) by Bella Chang, 8yrs old》
1847
I ate my dinner then did my work.
"It's going to be late. " Mom said.
I hate night, because there are many scary things coming out in the late night, like mummies, monsters, ghosts, snowmen...etc.
I went back to the room and saw my big sister Emma brushing her hair. Her hair is so soft and smooth, not like my hair is dirty and messy. I sit down and want to change my look. So I look at the mirror and keep saying: "I am beautiful, I am beautiful, I am beautiful, I am beautiful! " All that words made me dizzy.
The next Sunday morning, my mother is always busy. I hopped around happily in the kitchen. I want to meet Katie as soon as possible, and I want to eat some cookies, the crunchy cookies. My sister is still beautiful, she is swing her dress in front of me, it's like a sky blue color with a white bow.
"Katie must be waiting for me! "I yelled.
My mom gave me a piece of bread. She reminded me:" Stay safe and come back before…."
"I know before 12:00. "I left home and ran across the trees.
"RUSH!" I heard those big trees roaring in my ears, loud and clear.
The weather is so cold, feeling like eating 49 balls of ice cream on the coldest winter day!
"Hey! "I waved to Katie.
"Are you ok? "Katie asked me worried: "I mean you look like to have eaten 48 balls of ice cream."
"It's 49 balls of ice cream. "I corrected her.
Katie was confused and looked at me with a face that "with one of my not the right time to say that."
Later, we walked down to the creek. We had two bottles, and played a game called "Splashed bottle!". We made a hole in the bottle, filled the bottle with water, and then splashed water over our heads, like it's raining, and also like we were playing with a mean boy!
"Bump! " Suddenly, Katie and I heard strange noises.
We froze like two snowmen who ate 100 balls of ice cream.
Katie was brave, but now...
"I thought you were brave why don't I see it now" I said super duper cooper quietly.
She looked at me and scared so was I.
"We shouldn't be joking at this right moment. "Katie Said.
Katie tip toe then went across the creek. "Splash splash……"
"Shhh… you are making the alien go away! "
She nodded, moved forward slowly, stared at the thing, and then grasped it!
"Oh, it is a poor little bunny. " Katie looked at the rabbit, even... already loved it.
"The bunny went to sleep?" Katie hugged the bunny so tightly like a baby. Sometimes Katie's hug is not a good thing, because she always kinda too excited.
"Let's grab a hull bunch of leaves to make it soft and feed. "
"We should give it to Della." Katie suggested: "Della is nice nurse for animals. She is only 9 years old, but almost 10. 』
As we walked and walked, we finally arrived at Della's hideout. There were many small animals staying outside waiting for her help, so she might be very busy.
We went inside the the little hut, which like a small house made of leaves and sticks. We looked around, there were a lot of food, medicine, water and other things.
Della is holding a cute and petite mouse named Alice.
"This poor little bunny was hurt and unloved. You need to help him or her!" Katie walked quickly to Della and said very very fast.
Della looked at the bunny very close. "I will see what is wrong with the bunny and tell you it's a girl or boy. "
Katie hugged Della tight as she could.
"Don't be that happy, we still don’t know if it's OK? Della said.
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(To be continued....)
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😘歡迎大家分享和按讚。
😎請尊重作家小貝拉的故事版權,如果要轉載者,請註明出處,切勿抄襲盜用。
另外,照片裡的小貝拉是在寫數學功課,不是在寫故事。她為了不被打擾,她都是躲在廁所寫故事的 😏。
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Hello ! Today is Vlog day ! No Stream today :X
And also after 3days of stream after school I feel like I need to prepare on weekend what stream content I should do for a week in details so I won’t be in a rush like yesterday XD
And also spend more time on studying Chinese so next interview I won’t be so nervous (ó﹏ò。)
Vlog will be uploaded tomorrow after editing !!
Hope you guys have good Saturday and I will see you tomorrow !
嗨!今天是拍Vlog的日子!所以今天沒實況 :X
然後呢,經過這三天在上課完的實況後,讓我覺得我應該好好在這周末規劃一下未來一個禮拜的實況內容,以避免造成像昨天那樣匆促的情形 XD
還有,我要花更多時間在學習中文上,讓我下次訪問別人時可以不要這麼緊張 (ó﹏ò。)
Vlog剪輯完後會在明天上傳 !!
希望你們大家有個美好的周六,我們明天見囉 !
안녕하세요! 오늘은 브이~ 로그를 하는날입니다
그래서 방송없을 예정! 그리고 3일동안 학교다니면서 방송하면서 느낀게 미리 주말에 뭐할지 생각좀 해놔야 한다는것.. ㅠㅠ
학교끝나고 낮잠좀자면 시간이 없다는것
그래서 ㅠㅠ 방송준비도 좀 미리 해놓으려구요!
그리고 중국어공부도 더빡세게하고용
브이로그는 유튭에 오늘찍고 내일 올릴예정입니당
그럼내일만나요~~
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台北去哪玩?!學學柏妤當個文青吧😏😏
#timefortaiwan
#康青龍
台北的康青龍街區,是一個充滿魅力的地方,我已經迫不及待了!
Kang Qing Long district is a place full of passion. I can’t wait..
2016-2017 Episode 16 Taipei Cultural Antiquities Walking Tour (1) 康青龍文藝街區(台北)
Transcript 影片文字稿:
歡迎來到台灣,我是林柏妤
Welcome to TAIWAN, I am Poyu Lin
我熱愛旅行,也喜歡在台灣趴趴走,如果你也和我一樣,告訴我最喜歡到台灣哪裡?
I love to travel ,love wandering around in Taiwan,if you are a travel junkie like me, let me know,What is your favorite place in Taiwan?
康青龍文藝街區
Kang Qing Long
康青龍文藝街區,是我的最愛
Kang Qing Long district is my favorite
台北的康青龍街區,是一個充滿魅力的地方,我已經迫不及待了!
Kang Qing Long district is a place full of passion. I can’t wait..
在台灣旅行,交通非常的方便,只要選擇台灣觀巴,就能搞定一切
Getting around Taiwan is really simple; all you have to do is jump on Taiwan Tour Bus.
車上有無線上網,平板電腦提供資訊,有英文、韓文、日文,當然還有中文
On the bus, there are WIFI and tablets available that provide information in English, Korean, Japanese and of course Chinese.
在開始文藝之旅前之前,年青人喜歡把自己打扮的有書卷氣息一點,在台灣,這樣的風格,我們稱為「文青」
Before this kind of trip, youngsters will dress up with an artistic feel, in Taiwan we call this style“Wun Cing”.
深受各國觀光客喜愛的「康青龍街區」,是由永康街、青田街、龍泉街,所構成的特色區塊,這裡聚集許多特色小店。
This foreigner-beloved Kang Qing Long district consists the streets of Yongkang St., Qingtian St., and the Longquan St., This area is scattered with boutique shops.
體驗茶文化,是觀光客來台灣很重要目的之一。
Experiencing tea culture is an important goal for tourist on their trip in Taiwan.
要泡出一壼好茶,步驟是相當複雜,在台灣我們會稱這叫「功夫茶」
To make a good cup of tea, it’s not that easy. We call this “kongfu tea”
讓我來為您示範,這茶葉是大禹嶺
Let me show you,How to make it?
大禹嶺,它是一種烏龍茶,保持高溫的水,1分鐘之後,我們就要來喝茶了
“Dayuling” a kind of oolong tea, which requires high temperature water. The warm cup and hot tea will bring out the best of the teas aroma. Let’s try it out.
茶泡好之後,我們還不能急著喝它,因為要先聞它的香味
After making the tea, don’t rush into it. Smell the tea part first.
哦~真讚,我覺得這就像是芳香療法,接下來我就要來喝它了
Oh~,is awesome,it’s like getting an aromatherapy,and now I,m going to try it.
很清香
It is refreshing.
我們踏出了認識台灣的第一步,接下來我們要進入時光隧道,有一間台灣歷史文物館,展現了早期台灣多元文化的珍藏品,其中有荷蘭時期、清廷、日治時間,乃至國民政府遷台等
Now that we have tasted the first step of knowing Taiwan, let’s step back for some history.The collection in “Formosa Vintage Museum” shows the transformation and diversity of Taiwan’s culture from the Netherlands, the Qing dynasty and the Japanese period, to the KMT government period.
走在康青龍街區的巷子裡,就像是進行一場城市冒險,
As I stroll down Kang Qing Long district is like an adventure.
這家超酷的店,可看見手工布袋戲偶和台灣花布文創商品,這些台灣人早期的共同記憶,到了現在藝術工作者的手,重新被賦予新的生命。
This is an awesome store; they have these traditional handmade puppets and flourish clothing. These traditional items have been reborn in hands of our local artist.
我看起來怎麼樣?
So how do I look?
你看路邊的這顆老樹上,掛的紅布條嗎?這在台灣代表著敬畏之意,我們相信老的東西都有靈魂。而說到老樹最多的地方,就在青田街,這裡的老樹被譽為「綠寶石」。
Can you see where the red cloths are hanging on the tree by that road? It symbolizes respect .We believe that there’s a soul in every treasure of the past. Speaking of old trees, Qingtian St. has the most oldest trees. These old trees here are called “emeralds.”
走在青田街,參天的老樹讓人感覺好棒,在日治時代,這裡都是教授住得地方
Look at these trees; it’s makes me feel good. During the Japanese period, this was a residential for professors.
在我們身後,是一棟和洋式建築,事由足立仁教授,於西元1931年興建的
Behind us,it’s the Japanese and Western style of the building, it was built by Professor Adachi in 1931
它的最後一任屋主,是台大地質學系的馬延英教授,經過翻修整理後對外開放
It’s last owner is Professor Ma, Ting Ying from the department of geography of NTU. After some renovation, it is now open to public.
在離開之前,証明我真個文青,我給你看一個東西,這是我今天在康青龍街區,用GPS留下的足跡,你們看,像不像恐龍
To prove that I am a real artsy, let me show something. This is the path we travelled today tracked by GPS. Look, does it look like a dinosaur?
你也可以用GPS,在旅行台灣時留下你的足跡,也歡迎你上傳到我們的粉絲頁,和我們一起分享!
You can also use GPS to track your trip in Taiwan. We welcome you to share your memories with us on our fan page!
我是林柏妤,享受你在台灣的時光,我們下次見。
I am Poyu Lin, enjoy your time in Taiwan! Chow~see you next time.